I agree with Dondon, i loveu this chapter so much and i can't wait to find out what happens next. I love the way they are both so confused about what's happening between them but when they get together they can't resist each other.
I loved the angry Ray, i couldn't stop laughing picturing the look on their faces.
Plus, the bit with Gerard saying he wouldn't fall in love quickly - ha ha
I have to also say the way you write about Mikey is so lovely, you just want to hug him.
Thank you so much
Author's response
Thanks Moonpig, i love reading reviews because you post something thinking it's a bit rubbish but people tell you they really enjoyed it so it gives me confidence when i'm writing.
I love Ray, i can just imagine him getting frustrated especially with Bob who's usually always on time.
I'm so pleased you like the way i write Mikey.