YES!
I am so happy that Jill and Bob are finally interacting in the open with each other and showing their true feelings. Bob better tell her how he feels before she leaves.
and I loved Frank playing cupid. he he.
and I agree with moonpig, I love the way you write Mikey.
great job, as always.
Author's response
Thank you so much, i just need to get a bit more confidence in my writing but the fab reviews keep me going.
There will be alot more of the relationship between Gerard and Eliza.
I haven't really decided if the story will jump forward, i can't say too much at the mo as the next couple of chapters are kinda a turning point for them both.
It's really hard sticking to real events as i have to do loads of checking up on the net to make sure i have them in the right place at the right time and i've messed up having them go home as i think they went straight on to Europe after the UK. WHOOPS :)
Ray is ace and is like the Dad of the group, well in my story anyway. I love writing Frank, he just makes me laugh when i think of him.
I do have a idea for a future side story with Mikey, i should maybe start thinking about how i'm going to end this one because it could go on for ages lol.