Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-13

You are silly! i really enjoyed this update.

i felt sad for Gerard when he kinda realised he so hadn't found the one!

Bob and Jlll are real life aren't they. Doubts, worry, concerns. I am happy they are Ok with everything but I am worried how soon they are gonna see each other?? Are you gonna have a jump to March 2007 when they come back to the UK or is Jill gonna go visiting them??

I love how you keep to real time and real events in that sense.

Anyway, Ray getting mad was totally how I see him, such a sweetie but very professional! And Frankie playing cupid! Well he is an angel!

And I am glad Jill is still keeping an eye on Mikey, bless him!

Thanks so much and more soon!!

Author's response

Hello, thank you so much for reviewing and i'm so pleased you are still enjoying the story. It means alot.

I really enjoy writing the relationship between Bob and Jill and then having the other guys interacting with them.

I really hope you like what happens next.