Review for Deadlines

Deadlines

(#) Moonshyne 2008-10-13

Hi there Neve,

These two are just the cutest.

LOL to Frank for playing cupid and talking both Bob and Jill into a one a.m. walk.

And congrats to Jill for finally being a little more open about them.

Loved the whole pre-show scene. Bob and Jill being caught, Ray getting angry but in the end he gave a smile so he really wasn't as angry as it seemed he just had a reputation to uphold!!

LOL!!

God bless Gerard he'll soon find the love of his life.

What can I say I just loved the whole thing!!

I can't wait to read more!!

Author's response

I'm so glad you liked it and it made you laugh - hurrah.
Frank is just so good and always looking out for everyone else. I love writing him.

Jill was kind of all over the place in this one as she really likes Bob but has major reservations.So pleased you liked the pre-show incident - ahh poor Jill.