"judging by the size of the ring Neville saw on her finger, she would be a Weasley before the end of Summer"
The above line nearly made me laugh out loud, simply because I pictured the gem on her finger to be about the size of a grain of sand. I never tire of Weasley bashing.
The ending was as good as it could be, I'd say, considering the fact that you lost interest in writing it. I disagreed with a lot of the things that happened in the course of it, but such is life.
Looking forward to more of your other works.
Author's response
Thanks for reviewing, but, I'm curious, what sort of things did you disagree with? I'm asking because I don't recall you mentioning anything, and, if there was an error in the story I'd like to know what it was.
If it's just a matter of personal taste, I can understand that as well, but I'd still be interested in hearing from you.
Thanks
Red