Another wonderfully entertaining and realistic ... well almost, story. I have read the 7 chapters at one sitting and can only reiterate my opinion in my review of SoG; it is well written, interesting and totally absorbing.
It takes a writer of quality to effectively project humour and you have it in spades ... or might that be clubs given the way you satirise our 'favourite' headmaster and his cohorts:-).
It is refreshing to find a writer who departs from the timeworn and hackneyed canon, with its many loopholes and at times illogical plots. You have my deepest admiration for formulating more likely reponses to some of the more ridiculous scenarios.
A cynical Harry and a vehicle for your own persona? Maybe, but at least he's a logical thinking being!
I wonder if you have anything in mind where Harry's wit and cynicism will lampoon Snape and his delusions of superiority?
I delighted in the way you explain the stupidity of a race of people for whom logic is a foreign language.
I liked the vampire episode in chapter 7 and the way Draco's posturing and ... I suppose moronic qualities are exposed.
Ok perhaps you are allowing your own sarcasm and innate cynicism free rein, but I love it!
Tibi grates ago fabellae. Observabo capitulum secundum; vale et probe. Clivius