Jesus.
When you write your first award-winning novel that will move millions, I want the first copy.
They way you write; I can't describe it. It's just so beautiful and vivid, which is odd, considering Brendon is blind. But, your descriptions of what he hears and feels are so realistic. It's as though I'm there with him, seeing him fall or sitting next to him as he eats his pancakes.
Your writing is just so lovely.
I love this story already. You must update as soon as possible.