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Well. I really like how you ended it - with Kakashi going into ANBU. And I adore what you did with Sakura, though I usually dislike her. Growing some decisiveness is the way to go. I can't believe it's over...but I like that Sasuke stayed. ^-^
My only criticism is the maternal/paternal author's note about Itachi. It kind of interrupts the story.
Other than that, excellent work! Thanks for writing it for me!
Author's response
Yeah, well, I whas feeling whimsical. I'm surprised it stayed actually, after all, my beta usually edits things like that out. I am so glad you like it, especially since I wrote if for you.^^