well i gave you a minus one rating
(illiterate) you obviously havent read any vampire stories ever
vampires burn to death from the sun
all vampires are turned
vampires turn anyone they bite
no vampires eatthey're dead,hello!)
blah blah blah
i should probably give you a cliche minus one rating for the future when harry will be bitten(it always happens, to save his special school chum)
sorry to be sarcastic but most of this has been done ad nauseum
the magic part might be worth keeping
have a nice day!:)
Author's response
So great of you to assume that Harry will become a vampire--particularly since it isn't true. Harry is a mage and always will be. As for the other vampire things...Well, clearly this isn't any of those vampire stories. As will every single other race in this story, I am remaking the races. I would have thought that would've been obvious, but apparently not. You say "all vampires are turned", well in case you haven't noticed vampires don't actually exist all we have are various legends and stories, almost every single one of which are different in some aspect or another. Do you really expect me to just copy what others have done? It's so much more interesting to change the race. Thanks for reviewing
--S.R.