First Great saga with dynamic characters(Yours!) and a great plot line. But as I'm a fan of either Hermione or Luna being with Harry. Though Luna and Hermione are close here, Hermione going for an old dude here just doesn't sit right with me. Please understand I really like this story its just that Hermione here could do better either keeping close to Harry & Luna or maybe going with someone from the student body that can keep up with her! Maybe adding Charlie Weasley might work, but as this is a completed story I'll hold my thoughts til the end!