Review for Motorcycle


(#) The_Resident 2008-10-25

An excellent story so far. The editing needs a little work, though. I am adding this story to my alerts and do hope you continue it to a satisfactory conclusion. I am a big fan of Harry with Hermione. In fact, a fan of Harry with almost any female except the fan obsessed Ginny. How JKR could have them married at the end of book seven... and the names of the children!?!?!?!?! That one boy's name is so wrong on multiple levels. Oh, well, that's why we have fanfiction, to correct JKR's errors and/or offer different realities where more common sense reigns. Keep up the good work and I hope you will be able to update soon.