Review for The Improbability Factor

The Improbability Factor

(#) shawnpickett 2005-05-13

Very interesting, a good start, I'm curious to see whats up with the pizza guy. I can see how your writing style has been affected by Douglas Adams, a great job, I look forward to seeing what you have in store.

Author's response

Thanks for reviewing! Actually I don't normally write like this, but I wanted to do a fic using that type of humor. Next chapter should be out in a couple of days.