You have no idea how much I love this story. It's so cute and sweet. And I can't help ut feel a part of the story because you are so descriptive and you really delve into the characters thoughts and feelings. So i'm giving you +1 for ambience.
I am IN LOVE with wiL here. He is just adorable. And I can't wait for wiL and Gerard's er, relationship develop.
xo,Emily.