Hi there,
I wish Ficwad had a preview button. I meant the last line seemed like he was hitting on her.
I'm sorry I didn't mean to give you a headache. Honestly I think I loved the update that was replaced by this one so much better. It was definitely one of the my favorite chapters. The images I was getting were beautiful, what Ray said was insightful and full of caring for all sides. Mary not realizing the full effect she was having on on Gerard and Bob.
I guess you have me caring too much about this story. But that's a good thing right? Maybe I'm a stalker, LOL!!
Believe it or not it was heartbreaking for me to write what I did. So I went back and reread it for like the fourth time with a new perspective and pretend I never read the previous update
Ray was cute about wanting the four kids, the poor woman he ends up with.
Poor Gee thinks Mary has someone else not realizing that she just doesn't want to break his heart.
Silly girl of course Bob likes you if he didn't you wouldn't have a choice to make.
I have a scary suspicion she's gonna run off again.
Let's see how many prizes Ray can win for Mary.
Good luck on your exams, I hope you do well.
Looking forward to the next update.