wow, this was pretty amazing. You told it very well and it seemed very real :] The ending made my stomach feel hollow - which is a good thing because it means you made the whole thing intense with one simple line :]
I loved it, great fic ^^
Rayray xox
Author's response
Yay I'm so glad that you got an emotional response from this! It makes me feel good, knowing that I was able to get you attached and then sever it so quickly with just eight-hundred or so words! Thanks so much for your review. Keep checking back and I promise there will be more.
xoxo Alessandra