Review for Dance


(#) MiikoAshida 2005-11-21

This is one of the most beautifully written stories I have ever read. The concept was perfectly examined and shown throughout, and the ending fit perfectly. As far as writing style and word choice, you have an exquisite voice. I can't really criticze this story, except to say that you perhaps mix the colloquial with more conventional language, which is a little awkward in places. Other than that, it was brilliant. ^_^