Nice start to a Harry that seems to have brains...yeah!!! Longer would be nice, as well paragraph spacing needs to be attended too.
When Sirius went off about the kids not supporting Harry, I noticed he didn't say anything about the adults. He has an excuse but where the heck has Remus been since third year let out? He dropped Harry like a hot rock, yet alone the twelve other missing years. As well no other adult in the order wrote to support him either.
Room was cool, glad it wasn't Gryff red & gold. Hope to see more soon and discover who or what the mysterious voice belongs too.