What a wonderful and arresting story; I love the slightly anarchic feel of the humour and the characters are truly priceless.
Not only have you seemingly collected the mischievous essence of the teenage male, but also the sometimes caustic humour of the elderly.
Grammy is a delightful character, whom I would love to meet - so alive; your writing paints a picture that a photograph would have difficulty improving.
There are many amusing lines varying from gentle whimsy to extreme satire, but the one that sticks in my mind, is Harry's remark to his crup after the altercation with the cerberus; regarding the need for a cleaning charm!
Thank you for this remarkable accolade to your writing ability. There is no way I am missing any further chapters!
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