(#) Vanir 2008-11-09
Very, very nice. The fact that you hint at more than you describe allows me to fill in the details myself. That's usually a whole lot better than detailed accounts. I'd love some more spacing. Edit-wise it's a bit hard to read sometimes. There's the occasional wall of words that hinders the storyflow a bit. Yeah, pot, kettle and all that.
I love the story. Update in your own time.
Vanir