I really like this story, are you ever going to update
Author's response
I really appreciate your intersest, but I have to laugh just a little. I haven't had any kind of response from this in over 4 months. I'll try to post some more in the next few days, or I can send you the link to another journal site, where it is in it's entirety.
thanks so much for your interest and your kind words. It does help keep a writer writing, that's for sure.