You're right, not any real action, but you move the story forward nicely. Ron, obviously, is going to be in for a world of pain, prior to dying, and I suspect he's got a hand in whatever happened to Remus and Tonks (one can hope they are "just" being held prisoner but I'd not care to wager on that). I'll second the question about the whereabouts and status of Luna and Neville as both could be of great help to the Hunters. It was rather amusing to see them playing with Dumbles as they did since they know from experience just how far they can push him; I especially loved the game-playing about Harry's standing as a customer and his whereabouts.
Brav! for this expanded and developed version.