I have to say, this is probably my very favorite HP fan fic out there. I have read hundreds, and they all had something wrong with them. A bad plot, the sex got too disgusting and too frequent, the editing was terrible, the canon was completely ignored in terms of the characters personalities, not enough detail, too much detail, bad pairings, really bad endings, totally ridiclious and impossible plot lines, lack of flow in the plot, and many more, much too numerous to name here. Your story had everything those stories were missing and more. I loved the whole story. The only thing I really didnt care for was the desecration of Dumdledores grave and laughing in his face at his death; I always pictured Harry being the better man in the end, with the extra compassion and forgiveness that makes him special. I would have liked to see more shit done to Ginny and her mother, like Arthur kicking them out of the family, maybe ending up as Knocturn Ally four sickle whores, however. They really deserved it. I was always in favor of Harry and Hermonie hooking up, but I liked what you did with Daphne a lot and was in the end contented with it. And good old Voldie as a weak snake in a zoo?? Beautiful! Couldn't get much better than that. I cant wait to read more from you, keep it up!!!! Tara cassidy