Review for Not titled yet

Not titled yet

(#) Lyanvis 2008-11-14

a cute title? maybe something like

I am what I am tonight
Crossed against love
dynamo woman
or you could put his name then his assumed name.
I can't remeber, it's one thirty in the morning and i'm brain dead but say his name is shawn and the name he assumes is shawna then it'd be
Shawn/Shawna
Jack/kimberly
etc. I didn't reread it because you need help with formatting- but i wouldn't mind betaing. and i replied to your forum post. though please- don't post the same thing successively like that- it irks people and most won't even read it when you do that. if i sound like a jerk, blame the lack of sleep, and sorry.

hands-
Lyanvis

Author's response

Okay, and for the title idea. I might actually use that. I really never thought to do that.

Sry. I meant thanx for the title idea, oh, and thanx for the review. I'd love for you to be my beta.