Review for Failing Twilight

Failing Twilight

(#) quirky_sass 2008-11-19

Just a note: I had read this story first but the computer i was on did not allow me to review therefore this is the only time i was able to.

The summary first pulled me in, after a brief glance at the title of course. To begin with it was a subtle pull but those intrigue me the most.

Usually i copy the chapters into a wordpad document to read later because the internet is not yet universally free. Anyway after reading this first chapter a nagging sort of conscience ate at my mind. I continued the tale and was pretty much swept away. It was enjoyable and you bring up valid arguments!! I'm glad to have taken the time to read this fic. Thank you.