Hands down one of the best HP fics i've read. You've got original plot, character development, action, great grammar and dialogue. It'd be easier to list all that you don't have. Ah, and this is the one bad thing as well. The end. I sincerely don't want it to be finished though because that way...I can read more.
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What to do? Well here's hoping you continue in the glorious way that you have been already doing.