Review for The Chance of a Lifetime

The Chance of a Lifetime

(#) Edward 2005-05-13

It sets you up for thinking this is another cliched solve-all-of-Ranma's problems stories, then provides a twist. It could use a little more proofreading, though.

Author's response

Thanks, chief - do you mean just standard proofreading or what? I'll take a quick once over to check things out.