Awwww!!!!
So fucking cute! It's funny because I read it like a little movie playing in my head and people around me are always staring at me! I giggle and pout and smile and basically look insane as I read this story, so thanks for that. haha
I really like how much happens in each chapter, you know? It's like this entire range of emotions all paired with actions and responses and dialogue and it's absolutely brilliant. People react like that. People get stupid when they're upset and I think to depict Frank as anything other than what you did, would not have been true to his character. (I know it happened in the show too, but it's different to write it down)
I can't wait to read what happens next with Frank and Gerard. And don't worry, the sex scene wasn't bad, just modest. ;) hehe
Cheers
Kat