(#) kjd 2008-11-30
i like it sofar it seems like it will go somewhere interesting if you keep it up =]
good luck
and in reply to this "Author's Note:
I am also looking for a secondary Beta if anyone would like to have at this story please PM me" we can't PM you =P
if you still need 1 in a few weeks ill volunteer but i dout id be uch use to ya =P
keep writing
Karl