Review for The Dark Light Within

The Dark Light Within

(#) Vanir 2008-12-03

Hmm. Anything with Dark Elves are usually a big nono for me, but this looks interesting. This piece read well, and i sense an underlying potential for funny situations. Pleease don't make him blue! Smurfs don't make good heroes. the red eyes on the other hand... Just imagine Dumbles first reaction. And Ginnys. On the other hand, let many bad things happen to Ginny.
Keep at it. I can tell that this is where the fun starts. Wouldn't it be great if S:t Mungo's had a cure? Developed recently by a muggleborn? Heh.
Thanks.

Vanir