Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) shaz124 2008-12-04

A ha! Finally glad to see that you're back in the saddle again. This chapter saw a new plot device ("the project"), some character development and some foreshadowing. While these things are needed, they not necessarily the most exciting. You were able to break it up into smaller chunks and added some humor to keep it interesting. Well done!

Hope to see more of this one soon.