Omg!!!!! That was amazing!!! Okay, so Tony's her dad, but what happened to her mom? Why did they abandon her? Ahhh what's going on???? I can't wait to find out!!!
BRENDON IS SO CUTE!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!! "That makes you even naughtier!" That was so funny! I love him and Ryan :) And Holly and Bill were so nice in this, I loved it.
Great job, I can't wait to read more! And don't worry, being late is completely understandable ;) this time of year is crazy!!