(#) BenRG 2008-12-06
A nice twist at the end. It shows that even a PWP can be used to tell a story if the author is good enough.
Now... let's do a bit of thinking. Hermione has screwed up a Polyjuice once before - with Millicent Bulstrode's cat. Now, she has taken a far more successful dose but with the magically-encoded material of a metamorphomagus/. I find myself wondering if such an act might lend itself to... /unanticipated consequences ;-)
BenRG's Rating: 7.5/10
Author's response
Thank yeeew! Porn is like violence. Without a plot...why bother?
You people are terrible! Always making me think of wonderful new ways to torment out heroes! Unexpected consequences, Hmmm? Seems to me, both Harry and Hermione would enjoy 'exploring' such consequences! Snicker!
Alorkin