First of all, I am so fucking glad you updates at last. And what a great job you did of it too.
I was fucking cringing when he was messing up all the words and stuff. It was great how you made it all realistic. I bet it was Frank running towards him, Frerard is so sweet.
I'm gonna rate +1 for excitement because the last bit of this chapter had me on the edge of my seat. I hope you can update soon. Alice.
Author's response
i'm so happy you reviewed. Yeah, I should be updating sometime soon. Maybe this coming weekend. The story's almost over and i wanna finish it off.