Sighs.
I just don't love this or the lighthouse either. I'm really sorry. I read them both (in one hit) and they just didn't really appeal to me. I'm sorry, I do like your writing a lot and it's a damn good idea but it's so rushed and I find it unbelievable that Frank would stay with Gerard and that they could act like that when Gerard is obviously mentally messed up.
Sighs again.
I am sorry, I'll read anything you write but it just doesn't hi me as amazing.
Please don't think I'm putting you down, you are a really good writer, honest, it's just these stories I don't like, not you or your other pieces.