this one sounds like how thode "choose your own adventure" books are written. Quite well written, I'm not afraid of needles or anything but I can understand the anxiety i didnt want to get a needle when i needed to get fillings I thought it would hurt like hell and it didnt my mouth was numb for like ages afterwards tho. Anyways loved it, you really captured the fear well, this definitely should be #22 in "moments".
xo CaT
Author's response
Thanks, Cat! I think I'm going to make this one a "stand alone" one though =D