Review for The Dark Light Within

The Dark Light Within

(#) Vanir 2008-12-08

Clichéd? Yes it is, but clichés are concepts that are so good that they've been used over and over. I've read a story where Harry became champion of the Dark and turned into a Dark Elf. It had it's moments but was never finished. If we could all make up our own inventive storylines, we wouldn't be doing fanfiction, would we? I do like this outset. You've gathered an interesting ensemble, including the milf mommy, and i do look forward to some hardcore Dumbledore-bashing. Keep it up. I'm sticking around. If you ever need ideas or such, I'm reachable through my profile. My writer's block only covers my own story.

Vanir

Author's response

Thanks for the offer. I am glad you don't mind cliched story-lines because I've read quite a few FanFics and most of my ideas will come from at least one I've read. I probably won't have much original stuff in any stories I write.

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