A very enjoyable read! I love the way it encapsulates Reno, unapologetic to the core, and with that wonderful 'Reno-logic' that makes me love him so. And I loved the line about Cloud not needing the sword for compensation.
(I noticed one typo: "The Cloud shifted a bit..." I think this was supposed to be 'then'? The paragraph formatting was a bit disconcerting, but that probably has to do with the upload command.)
It was surely not enough to take away from any enjoyment of the fic. A very lovely, squee-worthy look into a jealous, drunken Reno. Nice job!