Well, I have to be the rain now... sorry.
ashamed face
I did like it, actually I loved the idea of each cut representing a flaw, but then with the party introduction I thought it lost some magic. I think it's good, but it could be improved you know? Almost like it's a cake that's been baked but it needs another five minutes in the oven and then lots of pretty decorations to make it your true awesome magicness!