Upon stalking a friends fav's, I found this story.
OMG I can't believe I haven't found it before now. It's utterly amazing. You did make it seem so amazingly real.
Puts my stuff to shame.
xoxo Tabi
Author's response
That favorite-stalking thing, I do that, too, sometimes. It makes you discover lots and lots of good stuff!
Thank you very much; making the feelings real was my prior intention =)
Don't say that. I'm sure you write just fine so keep writing (heh, and reading)!