Beautiful fic. Lovely use of Koi and Kimmy as OC's. A heart-wrenching look into Rude and Reno's relationship. Action-packed, and it kept me reading eagerly to see what happened.
(One small typo I'll point out: "You seem'im?" Should this be 'You seen'im?')
This was an utterly believable peek into Rude and Reno's relationship that made me want to read more. Wondeful job.