Review for The Final Darkness

The Final Darkness

(#) Ithilwen 2005-11-23

Hee. I can picture Miroku holding Sango and not trying any of his old tricks. The reason I can picture it is because you've shown us that no one was watching.

His hand was "racked" with pain, as in "put on the midieval torture device called the 'rack,'" not "wracked."

Touching, especially "I am finished."