Review for The Dark Light Within

The Dark Light Within

(#) draghknar2003 2008-12-12

i like the fact that you have not pushed a relationship on us too fast.
the fact of fleur coming to the hall? is this another harem plot? i hope not, your story has alot going for it as it is. and as for the ginny/molly conspiracy, it was done better than most, ty for not making a big drama of it right off the top. it is like wine, it should be enjoyed, not gulped. :D
good job so far, and thanks for sharing the story. keep it up, and i will keep reviewing.