I didn't comment on all the other chapters, but they were all awesome. I loved all the characters interactions with on another. This has to be one of my most fav stories I've read on here so far because it's just such an excellently spun yarn. Well done. =D
Author's response
Thanks! :D I really enjoyed writing it actually. Some are easier than others, but I could see this one really clearly so it was just a case of writing it down.
I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot!
Sas x