Review for I NEEEED Help!!!

I NEEEED Help!!!

(#) Emo_musik_chick 2008-12-18

Name: Gabbie. [Well, not really, but this is a character, right?]
Hair Color: Naturally brown, but with thin red streaks going all around my head. I have a bang that goes down to my eyebrows and is slightly uneven because I did it myself. Proud smile xD
Eye Color: Hazel.
Personality (very important): I'm not the perfect Mary Sue authors always want in their stories. I try way too hard to please people, but in the end I always end up feeling worse about myself. I've got a really sarcastic sense of humor, and I'm different. And by that, I mean that no matter what I say, it comes out weird and people mock me. =I I'm your average Hot Topic-wprshipping [I ONLY wear skinny jeans and vintage tees], screamo-obsessed, moody, overly-opinionated, cynical kid, but I can also be quite mature, when I want to be. I won't intentionally be mean to somebody if they're mocking me- actually, I usually just sort of laugh shyly and pray that the moment passes-, but mess with my friends and I swear you die. I'm wayyy too much of a democrat, and I think homophobes will burn in hell. I hate being labeled and judged, but I do it to others all the time. I'm usually the first person to crack a "that's what she said" joke, even if it doesn't make sense. =P I also say "your mom" so often people yell at me [and I DESPISE "your mom"]. I'm more concerned with my friends than my family, I'll admit. And- PLEASE don't see me as a braggart here-, I've been called pretty [but I refuse to believe it and people who say I am can shut their faces because they will be-slash-are ignored].
Favorite Person in the Band: Frank or Ray, but I love them all.
What do you want to happen: Well, you're the writer. But since you seem in need of ideas...well, I'll take a big or small part, but if it's of any significance I'm a fan of the best friend-turned-girlfriend stories. I also think there should be some problems in the band, because that's always interesting.

You could do whatever you want with this character xD Make me the bitch, if you want. Or, don't include me at all, but either way I'll be reading this story and you can't stop me. =]
Good luck on the story. It'll be great.

XooX Albi