Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) red_jacobson 2008-12-19

I'm going to try this again; the last time the review got lost.

Nice wrap up, but I would have personally preferred more time spent with Harry Hermione and Luna, and less with Draco and Pansy. I would have like seeing the development of the relationship between the three of them, as well as what happened to some of the other characters.

Also, I may be forgetting something, but Hermione made a comment that she could not have children, but Rose was hers from Pansy, who was the host for James?

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