I agree with Red in that it would've been nice to read a more etailed synopsis of the lives of Harry and his two ladies, especially after Harry and Hermione created their Horcruxes and joined the Immortals. At the very least a scene where Hermione rattles the cages of some of the more misogynistic elements of the Immortals (Think Victorian-era Men Only British clubs).
Be that as it may, this was an excellent tale whose end was a long time coming. Now I'll have to re-read it from the beginning as we wait for the rest of 'The Face in the Pool' to surface.....