(#) lycus 2008-12-20
That was great but I expected Sirius ot faint or something. I know that I asked in my last review but will Narcissa start to feel love for Harry like Bellatrix did when she saw him in the cave. And does Narcissa still have random orgasims from Harry and Cissy when they are loving each other. And I didn't know that Katie was in the coven I thought that it was just Angelina and Alicia. And I hope that Sirius has a larger place to stay for all of the ladies Potter. And did we miss Minervas entrance. But I wanted to know if the Dursleys will ever hear about Harry being on good terms with the Royal Family?
Author's response
Wow, I can’t believe I screwed up so badly. I have no choice but to credit you for doing my ex-post-facto beta work for me. After a quick edit you’ll find that Angelina, not Katie, comes through the fireplace floo, and yes, Minerva comes through with Poppy.
Narcissa will always react to Cissy’s “happy times” but she is firmly imprinted on Severus – that lucky bat! Intellectually she knows she is echoing Cissy, but she was created to be absolutely loyal to her man, who just happens to be Severus.
Sirius’s home is large enough for all the Ladies of the Coven, and their mums. His London flat is a converted Victorian-era hotel. I should probably mention that in the story somewhere, huh?
The Dursleys will learn of Harry’s royal connections, and their reactions will be predictable.
And therein lies the problem.
I hate predictable.
So I’m working on it from what I hope will be a different angle.
N!