Woah... That was ... incredible. And, for the first time in a while, this was a story that completely held my attention. No getting up for a smoke half way through. No flicking between windows. Just completely and utterly lost myself in it. And that's something special before I must be the world's worst fidgetter! Congratulations on a stunning piece!
Author's response
Thankyou so much! You do so make me blush!