Review for The Face in the Pool

The Face in the Pool

(#) red_jacobson 2008-12-22

Well, I'm sorry you feel you don't have any more stories to tell, because I can think of one right off hand that still needs to be told. The sequel to Training and Confrontations, where they get their memories back and get back to where they should have been before you ended the original story.

Also, I have to admit, I'm kind of disappointed in the way this story ended, it seemed like you forced way too much into one chapter, the events would have probably flowed a lot smoother if it had been stretched out over 5 or 6 chapters.

Anyway, besides that, thanks for a hell of a ride, I've enjoyed just about everything you've written, and hope to see more in the future.

red