canustakemyheart told me I should read this one. I like it. It's nice to see a story with drama, and action and emotion that has nothing to do with "teenagers in love in high school" (yeah - not really into reading that type of stuff!). And of course, I gravitate towards, "the dark side" as well so I love a story where it's very possible that everything does not turn out "ok".
I like your dialog too.
Keep it up!
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